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"I should like to write of many things"
Of Wonderlands, and secret spots, or spice and seasonings.
To rhyme, not reason, seems so fair,
As we watch 'neath a roséd air.
Clouds and emeralds - silk skin bare -
Before the dinner-gong rings.

Ginger-beer and idle eyes, I sit and do not idolise
I merely think, twig-riddled hair; climb trees despite their size.
Of mauve-topped crimson fields of wind,
We sit and smile at thorny kin,
As kisses linger on pre-bared skin,
Soft songs to sweeten cries.

Cry shall I not, 'tis dead and chained
And forget I shall of glum refrain:
Upon a time when Moon swept down
And touched her lips upon the ground
I wait for them upon my brow -
And dance, in freezing rain.

But Summer comes, and know not I
What shall I do to pass the time?
But sit and gently fantasise
Of Sun and paper-coloured skies
Paint-pots and moleskins be my guide,
As I wait for Love's faint chimes.
©2008-2009 ~Llywenlla
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This is for those who have never felt Love.
And for those who have, and require escapism.

Pity...
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Wow.
I really love your structure,
and rhyming scheme.
The first stanza is by far my favourite,
lovely opening to a wonderful poem.

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
if brown is not beautiful
i am a shame
for the dress she wore
was me

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Sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast.
I wish i had one
who would
wish to be
my dress.

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Sic hoc adfixum, in obice legeres potes et liberatier educatus et nimmis propinquus ades!
it almost sounds as if you resurrected Emily Dickinson here.
a fire that burns

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Sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast.
she had everything.
but icy rain - felling
trees which do not lie.

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Sic hoc adfixum, in obice legeres potes et liberatier educatus et nimmis propinquus ades!
why thank you! i haven't read any of her work - I'll have to go and enlighten myself...

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Sic hoc adfixum, in obice legeres potes et liberatier educatus et nimmis propinquus ades!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it - I love it when my work appeals to people on all kinds of levels :)

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Sic hoc adfixum, in obice legeres potes et liberatier educatus et nimmis propinquus ades!
you have my interest as a writer. im one of ur watchers starting.......


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...now! lol. this is good, i'm drawn to your style.

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a voice inside my head breaks the analogue.

~Judas130

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